I AM that I AM pervading all space
That was until I acquired a human face
The brain was a slave, it is now my master
A whirlpool of thoughts moving faster and faster
The duality of life gave birth to illusion
Dwelling in the mind, it became the ‘I’ delusion
‘I’ search in vain for the ‘ME’ with my mind; never found
For the mind is in ‘ME’, not the other way around
You should take a look at Sri Aurobindo's epic poem Savitri. I think you will like it. I have quoted some of it for Daily Meditations.
I like your poem.
Savitri seems to be an epic! Will attempt to go through a part of it